when I come across typos or wrong word choice/phrase, I mention it using: "*corrected*" instead of "reg"; *corrected; reg ⏭ corrected My way of assisting non-native English authors sound more fluid
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"His archery skills were not bad, and the second arrow was obviously shot with both arrows." The end of this sentence/statement is very confusing! !
"…to Carol after…" the 'aa' is unnecessary
"…what *she was…"
"Carol retorted." instead of "Madisyn retorted."
…at the table *as he* headed back there.
Her shout *drew the attention …
*excitement instead of *excitmenet
Eithan » Ethan
queastioned » questioned
"…have *disappeared instead, as his absence might have hurt* her less…"