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It's boring just to see the chaos that occurs, it's better to fight with green pigs and I'm curious about the system. So it's more boring just to meet for a few hours and talk nonsense about love. ( I don't know about the author's mindset that just looks like that, WOMEN ARE COMPLICATED BRUH ).
REALLY LUCKY TO DIE BEFORE THE DOOMSDAY ARRIVES :))
Suggestion: this novel has an interesting story. a nerd who is selfish and experienced in thinking. in an urgent situation he can see the advantages and disadvantages. example in the outer disciple competition (In other novels maybe the protagonist would hide everything and pretend to be smart because of tricking the cultivation level with the reason of ALMIGHTY SYSTEM And Ada would seek thrill by slapping the opponent's butt.) But the novel had a flaw in terms of background. example (if han cai is relaxed why not make pills or formations, don't rely too much on the system. if you have free time add more experience with pills, formations or talismans.) And what I like is the time skip, if the time skip would you please explain in more detail about the things that went through for example refining the longevity pill for his father or his mortal family? it's much nicer to look at than to look at the sights all the time or at least once make another hobby (silver flute) calms down in terms of cultivation. and heavy on his explorations (spirit mine) and occasional comedic themes to keep things less tense. DON'T LISTEN TO THE RATS STILL ON YOUR OWN HEART. IF THERE ARE ANY INTERESTING SUGGESTIONS THEN THINK ABOUT IT.
if you really want to get strong quicker be like 'han jue' stay low and one slash if things go wrong. (Hey, if you're like a narrow-minded virgin, you're not strong yet, you've already caused trouble)
Advice "At least be selfish for your own sake, if it's advantageous for the sake of strength then do "beneficial" things like fawning over the young master/princess. if it's just an ordinary person do you want to be "robinhood" come on be selfish for yourself. good but if you do it many times it might look "disgusting".
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Boa Hancock. Nami. Robin!!!!!