Flying_Squirrel1

That was really good author you captured demiurge’s character greatly in how he behaves and his way of speech and also ainz’s inadequacies as a leader and how he didn’t catch your play on words with the root in the prophecy, also the suspense was done wonderfully great work but 2 chapters after 17 days man

Yes war with nazarick

But author really “manipulated”, the guy was off mentally. He killed not only little children but also retired shinobis, old women, and probably ones who were pregnant. The idea of him thinking like hokage at four only means he saw the importance of the village in the grand scheme of things(in how it protects young children from war) he isn’t all that to me because he never tried to see his father’s view point and that he believed the uchiha are too arrogant isn’t Danzo and hiruzen arrogant they believe there the best just because tobirama was stupid enough to take them as students. (Another point that shows how some people are stupid in some areas as tobirama was a genius in logistics and being a shinobi but a terrible judge of character) itachi to me isn’t a tragic character just a stupid one. Naruto is suppose to be dumber than him yet danzo would never be able to manipulate Naruto into massacring children and old people.

This would have been a good spot for a pov change of what they spoke about

Take it

I like this chapter I think you did a good job with the tension with how you didn’t go in deep on what terrorblade did and by keeping us at the edge the suspense was built well good writing