Kaden_Stapleton

Max is female.

I have enjoyed the story otherwise.

Author, please don’t keep having the MC act like that. It was fine when he was 11, but he’s now 16. His sister, who cares about him more than anyone else, doesn’t even know the real him because he’s been pretending so much. There’s a difference between occasionally having fun and doing it so much that the person you care about the most doesn’t even know the real you. It’s also pretty weird that the MC seems to be okay with that. Obviously, these are just my thoughts, but this fealt like it needed to be said.

The story is going great, just hoping the romance side of things gets more time and isn’t just a sidenote.

I’m liking the story so far, just wish the chapters were longer.

Author, your story has been great, but what is going on with the romance??? Please, stop keeping us so confused with it. Also, if people are going to keep only thinking about the “prophesied one”, can we not see it? The MC is going to get screwed over at this rate and I’d really not like to see that. Still, the story really has been great.

I hope the MC doesn’t ignore romance for too long.

It should definitely be Ben.

At 28 chapters, the story is progressing well. It has interesting lore, and the MC has an ability that is different from a lot of the stories you read on here and it is currently being handled well, with a lot of potential. There’s also already the hint of romance, which I am happy to see. Hopefully, it won’t take forever for that to continue progressing. Hard to say right now since it is still early, but I’m happy with everything I’m seeing. There are the occasional mistakes in the grammar, but those have been minor and there are not very many. Keep up the good work Author!

Your descriptions of the battles are steadily getting better.👍