lordharry

lord of the mysteries

See... this chapter was great. 1st and 2nd chapter should be one long chapter, imo. Your choice author 👍

Short first chapter, and MC has already switched to the second setting. I didn't get to know anything, but was only confused about what was happening at the end. May be author is directly picking where he had left his previous book. not sure if it was a great idea. Anyway, writing is extremely good. I wish i could get more info from the first chapter.

Reading thoughts in the same format is quite confusing. Can you separate them using brackets or '. most authors so the same

might be you meant *even younger

*had

some tense issue here

its going over my head

that's convenient

MC had a fling with a character from Game of Thrones, but no true love interest as of yet (I am stockpiling).