nvanattia

FYI the bird's name is Ashlyn. I know that the author constantly messes it up, but we should get it right at least. I agree that the MC does not need to be OP in the first 100 chapters, but how about some progression? He comes out of the secret realm with around 200m credits worth of loot, sells 22m worth of it and other than helping his folks, he just rents a place and spends 3 months working out and partially learning a combat technique. He then signs up for this tournament knowing he is too weak to do anything significant, but will probably pull something out due to the ever present plot armor.

The whole secret realm arc just repeated itself constantly. He gets into fights with something stronger than himself, gets beaten up, finds something to heal himself, and then breaks through and gets just strong enough to beat what he is fighting. Then the every next battle IS THE EXACT SAME THING!!! If the author fixed all the grammatical issues and poor translation problems, maybe it could have some appeal, but it could have been a 10 - 20 chapter arc and I doubt there would have been anything different than spending like 80 chapters on it.

The abysmal writing quality and complete cookie-cutter repeat battles are pretty obvious reasons for the ratings to fall.

The translation is atrocious. Constant missing words. Mistaking the MC's name for another character's name. Practically every battle is just a repeat of the previous ones. The MC is weak and struggles at first, and then either makes some miraculous breakthrough during the fight or gets lucky with some stupid idea that any other character would die trying. No significant progress in his level and abilities though all of those around him are progressing . If it wasn't for the fact that I am caught up on 5 other stories and can read 40-50 chapters a day, I would have dropped this 80 chapters ago. There just isn't any suspense or any hook. The plot is dry and with as bad as the writing quality is, there is no surprise that your rating fell off.

So, is it common for people to walk around with drones hovering around them and going into places with them?

I would be so disoriented if I suddenly had a second point of view in my mind and could change between them.

Avatar for what? I mean we are a couple of paragraphs in and it is already confusing.

Does it stop repeating chapters? Starting at the end of the 600s every other chapter is repeated and you are constantly missing whole chapters.

The MC was locked in the cage for a week and the lady was gone, so who could have tended to the fire during that time? Sure he left to go back to his world for a bit, but that doesn't change how long she was gone for in that world.

Well, I am up to Chapter 271 and the issues are still occurring, so the editor must not be doing too good of a job. We can also add ire to the list as you constantly use eerie instead of ire.