Rathowm

This novel is captivating and compelling right off the gate. First person perspective is nicely done. Story flows well and the characters are very likeable so far. Lots of chapters right away. Keep it up, great work.

I love the passion put into this story. I also love the profanity. These characters and the dialogue is hilarious. Of course some grammatical errors but those can always be fixed. Keep it up

I really enjoy the world-building. Its clear that you've put a lot of time and effort into it. The story is fun an engaging right off the bat. Reading flows well. It has me looking forward to more, good work. Keep it up. Looking forward to see how the plot turns out

This is starting off as a very real and heartfelt romance story. Only a few chapters in and you can tell the direction of the story, and it make you want more. I enjoy the first-person perspective, the story is written well and is easy to read. Keep up the good work.

Here we go, ladies and gentleman. Her fate was sealed here.

Oh my....

Oh, nice twist.

How cute. By the way, id appreciate a review swap.

The premise for this novel is simply amazing - it alone can carry the story. But even still, the author brings in engaging characters, dialogue, interactions and more. An excellent romance novel, and I love stories in first person. Good work, and keep it up author.

Wonderful use of language on vocabulary. Right out the gate you are introduced into a unique world with a large looming menace. A wonderful Sci-fi novel, with great action. The main character, Gus, is a very likeable man. Keep on writing, great work