JoseDavid07_11

Incredible, simply incredible. I love how the story is handled; the pacing and development are excellent. The characters perfectly capture the essence of One Piece: they are fun, charismatic, and well-developed. The battles are also very good and exciting. And lastly, something I really loved is that the plot is set during the Rocks era, a very interesting period that unfortunately isn’t often explored in fanfics. Overall, a solid 5/5.(Google translator)

excellent chapter, I like how the story progresses, I like that Asafa behaves more like a real lion, but without forgetting that the story is based on a children's program so it will not be completely realistic (Google translate)

and regarding the poll, I vote for number 4 (Google translator)

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Thanks for the chapter 👍, although it would be good if the story progresses, the fic is getting boring just seeing his life in the academy (Google translator).

I think it is too hasty to judge the fic with only 1 or 2 chapters, not to mention that an exaggerated healing is not something unheard of in naruto?, considering that there are jashin members like Hidan who are practically immortal, in addition to a great healing factor although incredibly useful doesn't cancel out the difference in strength, there are also several ways to defeat him like capturing him, or sealing him (the best example is Edo Tensei, as there were multiple very powerful shinobi who were practically indestructible, inexhaustible chakra, etc, and yet were sealed) [Google translator]

thanks for the chapter 👍

I think it's a bit rushed to leave it at the first chapter, moreover, although the negative features are annoying, there are still the positive ones that can balance it out, anyway, it's ok to read a few more chapters to see how it turns out. (Google translator)