kartik_porwal

good

First of all i want to start with saying that i do not usually give reviews but in this case i had to give one out of sheer disappointment i had with it,first of all main character is stupid and you do not have to do much to know about it just read the free chapters and you will know but for those who are here just to take a glance as to what to expect from the novel Our MC was supposedly a S rank hero and so he knows a lot of things (as expected ) the world is a changed i admit but not so much that he did not know anything at all,so he knows that the government is corrupt and they will experiment on him if he draws too much attention and they can also involve his family and OK his parents were not there in his previous life for him but atleast his little sister was but the first thing our MC does after getting a little power up and a CHEAT SWORD is to fight monsters in rift outbreak even though he did not have to and why?only because he can get a LITTLE stronger that's right just for a little power up he exposes himself on LIVE TV alongside his Unique sword and got seriously injured even though he confidently stated he will handle it,So ok mistake happened but it should be Ok afterwards right afterall our MC surely would not put himself in danger after his Mom cried and scolded him understandably and he promised himself to do better and what would you know just the very next task the MC does is to RISK his life and how you will ask?well he sneak into an illegal auction that very day for a C rank skill That's right readers for a C rank skill that is supposed to make someone immortal now how is that possible for such a low level skill who knows?ask the author for making such a stupid power system,anyways the thing is that it did not go smoothly as expected,because something changed and then the MC would have to go against a very very very powerful woman to get a skill(which is a different skill not the immortal one)and he said he had a plan to do it and well what could that possible plan be well it is to just bid without having any money and then try to steal the box and get out of the window without being caught by the woman(who can kill a man just with a flick of her sword from a distance as MC had already seen it before happening) and then reality happened and when MC stole the skill book he got caught by the women that very second and then he got enlightenment that he cannot escape even after having such a grand plan of heist from that woman SURPRISE SURPRISE! Well that was a long rant the only thing i will say that the MC is the stupidest character you can ever get and this book is only good if you want to turn your mind off,and for those who think that MC will get better through character development that will not happen he will get trouble every time due to his stupidity and only get out due to plot armor and there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT Aside that from MC and Evangleline aside from then every other is just a cardboard character

you do know that 1% means 1 in every 100 right?if you go by that probability then even a town having 10000 population would have 100 blue card users,so it is not as rare as it looks at first glance

sounds like every asian parent and teachers dream magical item

Hlo there author.i really wanna ask something is ruby really a female lead for the book i mean i am at around chapter 220 something and i know for a fact that ruby spends almost all the time with the main cast and only some occasional time if ever with ren,it is getting really boring you know like the MC is important i know but ultimately it is the side characters and other leads that makes the story alive ,when ruby got introduced i was really excited thinking about the bantering and all but ruby is now feeling like nothing other than another member of the main cast who just sometimes meets with MC and chat with him

you do realize that asking to destroy a royal and a duke family is essentially the same as asking to destroy the country right?

Not gonna lie just read the free chapters and you will understand,that it is nothing much but a copy and paste of the typical Japanese novel mc that you will find anywhere that are simps and the only thing they are good at is their luck and simping,there is this girl called hina whose parents were saved by mc and the first thing she did was to stare at him and say she hates him and she continues to did it every single time and our mc just smiles every time like a pathetic f**k and then after this whole fiasco author gives 1 paragraph of 3 lines explaining why she did this and thought everything is fine,it was also written that in original novel she died in the middle after her parents were killed,well i think that author with the original novel has better common sense then the current one who is pushing for this hasteful b***h to become heroine,i would rather have the mc just remain single

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Not gonna lie but i feel like i didn't read a chapter at all.The whole chapter can be basically summarised as the MC trained physically for two months and his relationship with his sister remained bad but his parents improved a little.Just read this summary and you won't miss anything in the chapter and well it is not like it feels like a chapter anyway more like a little big paragraph

Ok so i have read almost 200 chap till the part just before they decide to go to the snowy mountains,not gonna lie the story has great potential though it was ruined due to tons of grammatical mistakes and with character having only 10 year old personality,During early 50 chapters i thought it is authors first story so it is fairly normal for to have some problems regarding writing quality which is normal in this site,but now i am over 200 chapters with no improvement whatsoever in the writing quality not to mention the personality of character are like so bland i mean how can they shout out every little thing and become impressed at every other,not to mention the mc has no caution and openly tells anyone who asks everything about himself and when i say everything i mean everything from his every skill to how he learned them to his weakness to not be able to learn mastery skill,i sometimes think if someone asks nicely enough he will even give them his house and locker keys with a smile.I still really really liked the premise of the story and am gonna read a bit more with hope of improvement in at least the writing quality.But for those who are looking for quality story this will not be a story for you it will seem like you are reading mtl.Also i hope this is not true but it seems author delete reviews below 3 stars otherwise i cant see why there is no other review regarding the writing quality with low ratings.