A young man living in fantasy
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I honestly don't see her appeal
Really? A buastard is a bastard
Why have you been slowly chipping away at the MC's strength and potential. In some of the previous chaps and this one. How, HOW can he get hurt a measly enchanted sword. Its not even a legendary sword (e.g Excalibur). And as a yokai, a 9 tails for that matter, how can he not see through an illusion from a lower tier world.
Thanks for the chapter I suppose. But! Isn't it very unreasonable to have 69chaps and still be on Team Assingments. Like I started this book 2 hours ago and I'm already done. Wouldn't it be better to actually just write a chap every other day instead of every single day. This way instead of the average 900 to 1200 words you said you have, you would be able to write more and have more ideas? Like I scroll 3 times and the chap is already over. You haven't moved the story at all, it's 90% just chat group conversation, 5% is focused on Makoto, the other 5% is just other stuff. I'm not criticizing, just extremely curious why you would spread your story this much. A day in Makoto's life is like 10chaps of just talking and talking.
Darius? yes he does
Haha, it's honestly frustrating
Are you gonna keep pointing out Ainz is a skeleton or dead all the time?