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You have been extending the plot for ten chapters, a copy oast appears, first the MC mentions how the council is corrupt, then Hiruzen mentions that the Uchihas are a problem, then Kakashi hesitates and then Danzo appears, at this point in the story he has repeated the same thing about 10 times, it makes the plot feel slow and he does not advance on a whim to make more filler chapters.
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At level 13 he can learn metal claw
He learned metal claw at level 13, dragonbreath at level 12, dragon rage at level 22, flame burst at level 28, inferno at level 36, fire spin at level 27, slahs at level 20, fury swipes at level 18, rage at level 22, fire fang at level 17, flare blitz at level 40. That's according to pokemonMMO, but in other games, he learned flame burst at level 24, sping of fire at level 32, and dragon rage at level 16. With so many special attacks, dragon-type movements must be a real machine.
I don't want to be annoying, but I've already had several chapters where the content is isolated and without a story to follow, I don't know what happens, or how the story progresses very well and there is little character development, because it focuses on other things... The quality that has always been there begins to drop a little.
Why Sebas? Sinnoh, alolah, what about that?