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Looking forward to this book as well. From what I've read thus far, Lisa is in an interesting position. I cannot wait to see what is in store for her
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Finally, a book that his word building in it. I wanted to find such a book for some time but nothing caught my attention.
For what it's worth, I really enjoyed this story. It was nice to see someone write long chapters for readers (even though clarity was never the best) but I will advise you to keep going on and improve in the future as well.
Lol. This gives out major gothic vibes to me and I hope you'll include more of the explorable elements of mythology or it'll feel like a missed opportunity
It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.
No. He'll not stay single forever, but he's also 11 right now. Harem tag is there because it will become a huge plot point pretty soon
The main romantic interest is in the background for now. Maybe MC will get a lover in the future but I'll set up the important bits first. I need to get the background of characters established first and relationships to hint at. Xion is so much trouble but fun to write too and her fem harem. I have plans for her alright
Study degree?
The synopsis seems catchy. The first few chapters are good as well and I can see this develop into more. The plot is just setting up so I will see how it developed before leaving more crit here