FlameSpear

I will suggest you to get a beta reader, I saw many small grammatical mistakes.

he hates that place and would likely keep it where he could easily access it. most likely beneath his brothels

update?

copied from Samrat Hemchandra's flag

never focus on those comments and delete them

don't drop it and don't worry about those who dropped it. you can never satisfy everyone

Granger would take Harry in as they already take care of Ian. As for allowed in Hogwarts he could leave it in forbidden forest, while dangerous for the snake, is possible

a sickle is only 29 knuts

please correct such sentences. it happens at least once every chapter.

bahadur shoes would be better after 1971 due to its dual meaning of his grandfather and war hero Sam Manekshaw.