bear_Freak_2422
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bear_Freak_24224 months ago回復 bear_Freak_2422it broke my immersion.
- bear_Freak_24224 months ago發表
a boy from.. not a from boy.....
- bear_Freak_2422a year ago回復 bear_Freak_2422
why is it like this?I spaced it out to make it readable.
- bear_Freak_2422a year ago發表
I think it would be better if you did something to indicate the past.something like:a few hours agoorflashback you know, to make it flow
- bear_Freak_2422a year ago發表
* he felt more than/then that....sorry, my English is good😄
- bear_Freak_2422a year ago發表
to me, he seems stupid.
- bear_Freak_2422a year ago發表
This reminds me of Gira Gira by Ado
- bear_Freak_24222 years ago發表
what's his age?
- bear_Freak_24222 years ago發表
honestly I hope he gets hit by a dose of reality and matures.
- bear_Freak_24222 years ago回復 Phoebelebe
hahaha I completely forgot I made this comment, you're right, now that I've read 300 something chapters the flaw makes sense and I like this book.