OrdinaryRandom

well, keep writing and read more books

I Became An AntiHero

Wanna review the swap? I'll read and review your novel and you can read and review mine? reviews need to be honest

It's a hot mess, do not read this don't even try you won't be able to. Grammar is none existent. I would've recommended that the author use Grammarly but I doubt that it could help. read some good books author.

All you lack is writing quality, apart from that you have everything. Myah seems like a good character although his design is quite feminine ;) Keep up the good work. I've read 3 chapters till now and apart from the grammar, everything is nice.

Myah's background is tragic, and his uncle betraying him is even more tragic.

I think that's what he's doing... no offense author.

dude, you can't describe stats with "Average" it needs to be a number. just don't add a system if you're going to write average

A demonic-looking angel? yeah right

Hey! your novel doesn't have any reviews. Mind if we review swap? I'll review yours and in exchange, you can review mine. if you don't want to just delete this comment.