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YunaYo

YunaYo

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2021-06-07 加入Global
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  • YunaYo
    YunaYo3 years ago
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    If you can get past the beginning, where some of the author's inexperiences are shown, it's actually really good. The fights are cool and characters are well written. Writing quality - I see a couple of people complaining about grammar in some other reviews, but I haven't seen any major writing error, maybe some small ones that can easily be glossed over. All in all, it's well written. Stability of Updates - no complaints here. 1 chapter per day, and a promised mass release Story development - Something happens in every arc, and the story seems to be developing smoothly. No complaints. Character Design - As I said earlier, I've been finding the side characters really enjoyable so far, which is rare in a system novel where the mc is the only star. Romance is good too, noharem as promised by the tag. World Background - Well, you can tell a lot of thought has gone into the world building before you even start reading the novel. There's an entire map of the world, and the setting of the world is portrayed well as the story continues. TLDR, the story starts to shine after the timeskip, at least in my opinion. At the end of the day, you shouldn't care about what I think. Make your own opinion

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    YunaYo3 years ago
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    Good story, good characters, good development, what else can I say? Honestly, the story development surprised me with how well thought out it is. Time to continue reading