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I know you are trying to make the MC funny, but he just comes off as retarded. Please tone down the cringey stuff a bit. Otherwise this is a very good story.
The Story is pretty good, the MC needs some character development though. He needs to stop acting so cringey.
The MC was really annoying in this chapter, Also why does his character keep changing so much so fast?
Why is his character getting psychopathic & dumber as the story goes on?
And the MC is a 28 year old transmigrator. Like the story started out alright but the last few chapters just feel like a pedo fantasy or something with the dialogues.