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  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs2 years ago
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    At first, the novel starts well, we think mc is evil. He acts with logic, uses his brain, tries to gain power. When he goes to the world of Harry Potter, everything becomes garbage. Mc loses his brain. The author forcibly changed the subject of the novel.

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  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs2 years ago
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    mc has no brain, there is no logic, the plot does not make sense, mc plays the hero. the powers are again in the hands of the wrong person.... ........

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs2 years ago
    回復 thelightedghost

    if you don't like the food, you tell the cook that this food has never been good, the cook tells you to go cook better yourself.I don't know if your brain, which is not yours, understands this?

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs2 years ago
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    The author who deletes the low reviews. The fake high reviews. The novel turns out to be good at first, then garbage........................................................

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs2 years ago
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    the author deletes the low star reviews. The reviews are fake comments. mc has no brain, no logic, he acts on his emotions. The author manipulates events forcibly. The events are ridiculous, mc plays the protagonist. The system is again in the hands of the wrong person.

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs2 years ago
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    mc is stupid, his brain doesn't work, everything he does is nonsense, unnecessary plot, no logic. it would be better if you give the system to a passerby, he will act. the system is in the wrong person's hands again.

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs3 years ago
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    The mc brain is not working. The author better remove the IQ points. The author ruined the novel...................................................................

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs3 years ago
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    mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................

  • shsnnsjs
    shsnnsjs3 years ago
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    MC mentality and heroic behaviors lead him to die earlier. The title of the novel could be trying to die early. He can't accept that he will be (evil mc) instead of him. Let this novel be 20 chapters, and die in the last chapter because of this mentality:D labeling "dark" in the novel remove.

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