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Michelle_Roberts_5772

Michelle_Roberts_5772

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2021-05-24 加入Global
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  • Michelle_Roberts_5772
    Michelle_Roberts_57723 years ago
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    The plot of the story is captivating and slightly unpredictable. However, the way in which it is written, could be improved. While the author attempts to go between POV's, at some points throughout the novel it becomes messy and hard to understand (i.e. Stranger POV only to find out the name of the stranger later on). I found it unnecessary and redundant at points. Overall, the storyline and character development of Victoria is very intriguing.