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Chris_Cummings_5379

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  • Chris_Cummings_537917 days ago
    回復 Blood_soaked_bar

    actually shadow slave isn't very good. The MC is basically a side character. Yes, he is a slave and is that way intentionally but there is no trade off. He is weak and dumb and cowardly.

  • Chris_Cummings_537917 days ago
    回復 Blood_soaked_bar

    Funny thing, this novel is mostly filler even from the beginning. Starting around chapter 30ish the chapters are so much filler. Then he even makes the MC shows stats 2-3 times a chapter which fills out the chapter. With how short the chapters are, it makes for a terrible read.

  • Chris_Cummings_537917 days ago
    回復 _Drakon

    Would be a decent story if it wasn't mostly filler. reiterating the same thing over and over. Showing stats 2-3 times a chapter. Chapters are already short compared to many stories. But then to be filled with mostly nonsense. Another story with a great concept but a terrible author, just filling in word count to get coins out of people.

  • Chris_Cummings_537923 days ago
    回復 morningstar_Anime

    well you obviously have no idea what actual good writing looks like. This is childish and maybe 3rd grade level writing at best.

  • Chris_Cummings_537923 days ago
    回復 DisenchantedReader

    Except he had a system and powers. So what if the world is more violent and has monsters. He has the ability to deal with that except he acts like his body's age. He acts like a timid and dumb 5 year old, even though he is almost an adult. Just because your brain can't handle a story with good and complex writing doesn't mean we all want 3rd grade writing.

  • Chris_Cummings_537923 days ago
    回復 MidnightWolfe

    It's not comedy, it's idiocy. The writing is childish in this. The MC is a moron and just sad. Even if he isn't an adult and only 16, he acts like a 3 year old in maturity and intelligence.

  • Chris_Cummings_537924 days ago
    回復 Halfsweat

    no they don't. The military guys, literally said that the guns just stopped working.

  • Chris_Cummings_5379a month ago
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    Terrible story, bad writing. The MC isn't even the MC, he is a sidekick. He just seems like the MC because he has plot armor level luck. MC is and idiot and just a terrible person overall.

  • Chris_Cummings_5379a month ago
    回復 Sikeade

    well that's because you are probably just as braindead as the author. You like stuff that makes no sense, if it did make sense your little brain couldn't handle it. This story is garbage, the MC isn't even the MC, he is a sidekick at best. He is lazy and dumb, he just has plot armor luck.

  • Chris_Cummings_5379a month ago
    回復 APARIMIT_SHUKLA

    Well this is obviously a paid review and you haven't actually read this. None of what you said applies to this story. The MC is not a likeable person. He is an idiot and is oblivious to the fact that he is an idiot. The MC isn't even the MC. The MC is more of a sidekick. Alec is the real MC. You're an idiot.