Ragib_Mahtab

give him a skill like (mana zone or something) where he can control any mana related abilities . It will not only remove his weakness but also give him a boost in regard of his abilities

Rasen ring From Naruto movie 6

love it.................. one of the best naruto Fan friction....................... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

well........ since it is a heram fanfriction i you should add Naruto in it in that world there are some very pretty girls in that world well just my Opinion rather you add or not It's up to you......and by the nice Fan friction

bro ur a genius........... awesome twist........... .........i am really waiting for the finishing.....wort the time............. hope you will continue with your work

need more update..... .......... ....... .......... ........ ......... .... ......... ........... .......... ........... .......... ........

Well.......the story is pretty good till now.........but where is the update....... it's been a month but no update.....really I'm waiting for month you know........ so hurry up with your update