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Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表I don't understand. Where they brainwashed or not?
- Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
Again, introduce the ranks in the novel.
- Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
How are they similar? Care to elaborate?
- Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
This is wrong. Even though you put the grade's in chapter 0, at least explain it in the novel before you start through around ranks. It will flesh out the novel more.
- Ashura_Omega2 years ago回復 boredperson
Oh, I see. I didn't understand the phraseing.
該書已被刪除。 - Ashura_Omega2 years ago回復 boredperson
Yes. It is a form of expression. And now I understand why the grammar is bad. Although I rated this story bad, the plot looks like it is going somewhere. I won't be returning to this book, but I hope you get better. Maybe use Grammarly. I will help you with your English.
該書已被刪除。 - Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
This is bad. The author is too inexperienced with really bad grammar and story structure. Or maybe they just threw this together in 30 minutes or something. Either way, this is bad.
該書已被刪除。 - Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
his
該書已被刪除。 - Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
Ok. He was thinking. It would be best to add it to the last sentence.
該書已被刪除。 - Ashura_Omega2 years ago發表
Speaking or thinking?
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