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OH MY GOD — bro, I caught up to the second volume right now and i’ve been witnessing nothing but peak events after peak events, the start to be honest felt like a bit slow since it seemed like a slice-of-life in a different world, but I couldn’t have been more wrong, y’all gotta read at least till chap 25 bcz yall goin miss out on some GOOD GOOD sauce!

This is exactly how I envisioned this scene, heat!

Congratulations, author, well deserved!

This takes an all-rounder five's, I have read the prologue which seems to tell us a little of what to expect for the future. The story, right now even tho the mc just came to another world, and is getting used to being here, is interesting. The interactions with Sean Seren and Luke are really funny too. So i also give the story 2 power stones, and i think i will keep giving it. I am definitely excited for the future of Nexus and Earth, and the synopsis i wonder how we'll reach to those certain points?

What a beautiful way to describe this beautiful scenery.

After the "ok" add a comma, and don't type it as ok, but okay--"Okay," she whispered....Just a slight correction and advice :))

Wow…i gotta say, i was expecting way less before starting the story, but that was overturned really quick. The writing quality seems really high and professionally done. Hmm, the story started in a weird place and juncture, but even though they are in court and stuff, a lot of world building seemed noticable, and the end of the envoy was also quite unexpected. Just the epilogue alone seems a little too long, i recommend writing bite sized chapters from 800-1500 words, considering that when people see too much text they get lazy to start reading. But overall i like the story, going to wait for updates!!

Okay, so i just wanna say that overall the synopsis is good, its too long for its own good, which i think will make people evade the story when the synopsis itself is so long, overall it’s pretty good, considering that ur only two parts in, the quality is great and the progression is quite fast—good job👍🏻👌

Thanks a lot for being a reader who actually read my story, i am about finished with the outlines for Volume 2 and soon will start writing again! Thanks again!