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I actually read through Chapter 9, then went back and reread chapter 1 before leaving my review. I didn't say she was weak, just the strong, assertive personality came across as someone I would very strongly dislike, therefore making me instantly dislike the book from chapter 1. Not everybody loves the same stuff which is why I felt putting that that was what I personally disliked was important as other people might fall instantly in love with her character, therefore my review should not be applied to them at all!

Seems pretty good so far but only 14 chapters have been released! Will have to check it out again once more chapters are released!

It seems like an ok book. Haven't spotted many mistakes, easy clear reading. Didn't interst me enough to read past free chapters but I think it is worth reading those to see if it is for you or not.

The first chapter or 2 was confusing. I think it needed more development and more proof reading. Seemed like an ok story but didn't intrest me enough to read past free chapters.

I personally strongly dislike the characters in this. The FL is supposed to be strong and assertive I think but I just really dislike her. It just jumps straight into things without much background or development which some people might prefer if they want things moving along quickly but not my preference.

I have only read free chapters. Interesting enough to read free chapters but not sure if I'm going to finish it. It doesn't have too many typos.

Another review for free fast pass. Browsed it briefly, appears the writing is ok, not really my preferred genre. The chapters so far are SUPER short but also all free so far. Hopefully when you are charged to unlock each chapter the will be a bit longer!

Did you finish it? It shows completed on Webnovel but isn't, just ends on a cliffhanger!

I have only read the first few chapters but so far I am enjoying it. No typos, good writing, and gets you hooked fast!

I was picturing more of a winged lion too!