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LazyHumor

LazyHumor

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Just a young man trying to do my very best at learning to write stories,

2021-05-10 加入Jamaica
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  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
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    Saw someone say it, not in any rush at all which is really good for the build up with the chapters. Very detailed every single each chapter. Seen your upload of chapters are really spaced out just work on updatng more often and also grammar and vocab always has room for improvement. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, i will be reading.

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
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    I actaully like this story, always like the weaktostrong and Loi seems well rounded so far in the first few chapters i can definetely see a great build up happen for loi. Grammar and Vocabulary is also great. I definetely recommend reading this book so far.

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
    回復 YajImagination

    Thank you, Will start getting back on the grind

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
    回復 Prince_nonchalant

    Thank you for your honest review. This has open my eyes more to the bigger picture and world background is something i shall work on!

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
    回復 Goke_black

    Thank you!

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
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    As everyone said, it has a lot of potential to grow. Tiny errors in the story but its good and one i will definetely read. Can't wait to see what happens next.

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
    回復 Yashan_Stephenson

    Thank you, New Chapter incoming!

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
    回復 infinity_224

    Thank you, Trying to make sure I put out more good chapters

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
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    As everyone said, it has a lot of potential to grow. Tiny errors in the story but its good and one i will definetely read. Someone dying already also pacing eh but im sure you know where you want your story to go. Can't wait to see what happens next.

  • LazyHumor
    LazyHumor3 years ago
    回復 RockieAuthor21

    Thanks a lot, currently figure out how to develop my characters etc. So, i hope I do well