Just a young man trying to do my very best at learning to write stories,
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Saw someone say it, not in any rush at all which is really good for the build up with the chapters. Very detailed every single each chapter. Seen your upload of chapters are really spaced out just work on updatng more often and also grammar and vocab always has room for improvement. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, i will be reading.
I actaully like this story, always like the weaktostrong and Loi seems well rounded so far in the first few chapters i can definetely see a great build up happen for loi. Grammar and Vocabulary is also great. I definetely recommend reading this book so far.
Thank you, Will start getting back on the grind
Thank you for your honest review. This has open my eyes more to the bigger picture and world background is something i shall work on!
As everyone said, it has a lot of potential to grow. Tiny errors in the story but its good and one i will definetely read. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thank you, New Chapter incoming!
Thank you, Trying to make sure I put out more good chapters
As everyone said, it has a lot of potential to grow. Tiny errors in the story but its good and one i will definetely read. Someone dying already also pacing eh but im sure you know where you want your story to go. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks a lot, currently figure out how to develop my characters etc. So, i hope I do well