Jacklyn_Seras

thanks for the information. I hade zero clue what the item slash weapon was.

this is my favorite version.

For the first chapter it was decent. It wasn't good nor bad. Yet it set the ground to build up plot potentially.

overall it isn't a horrible story. keep in mind that at the time of this comment I am at chapter 12 I think. however the translation is trash making understanding certain things very hard. sometimes impossible without looking it up on Google Translate.

I love how you brought up a seriously overlooked fact within the series. might guy was a absolute beast without any bloodline or ninjutsu.

I know the word it should be yet I like the one used better.

Author is a cliffhanger champion indeed.

siblings do to. not all families are kind. I've a foot long scar from a box knife my sister give. this was us playing as kids. as adults we slug each other now. again my point stands.

it is a novel that is a self insert with a hint at self fulfillment thus logic is while very important is also slightly a suggestion.

I like it. Love how you romancing Voma and getting to the potential that she could have. So long as you don't go SSJ5 or higher and stay at SSJ4 plus the additional forms am fine. Stack as many different forms as you like within reason and I should like the result.