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A question before I start reading it, Is Your name David 😅
Tbh I like Michelle more than Mary but isn't the guy supposed to be 5 yrs
I find American racism low at least they just belittle other races unlike Chinese authors who reduce other colours to animals and pigs that are dumb and can be slaughtered at will
And here I thought we were past this racist shit 🤦♂️
How did he lose his memory as a God cuz suddenly you just like ignored the part from the God realm
I can't recall when it was mentioned but I'm only complaining cuz the title of the novel and what is in the novel is getting further and further apart
I like it as you didn't make him only have powers when he needs to edit somethings but he also has powers to act when he needs it 👍🤜🤛
sorry for This, I didn't know you also posted it on this app, if you want I could take it down
author, It seems you've forgotten the main thing of this story, apart from using the system early on into the story and getting karma Taj's magic and top agent skills, this system doesn't really have a presence again and he's not gotten any powers of sort again
There a certain comic issue: Avengers #200 (1980) where captain marvel was raped by her son Marcus immortus that resulted in him being born, my point is that in many marvel fanfiction, there are many characters that will destroy Immortus yet Nick Fury will still have some kind of stupid confidence in her, though that can be attributed to him being ignorant and not knowing how many powerful ppl are out there and even on Earth and also him being ignorant of REAL power