Alima_Mahazabin

This book is amazing and I love the amount of effort the author put in to the book. It really pays off. The prose is magnificent and so are the characters and plot. Amazing job!

Wow. This is a book with lots of potential. I was absolutely drawn in through the world building and characters. The plot itself is absolutely reviting. Keep up the great work author!

The prose is very good and so is the protagonist. The first chapter does a great job of drawing me in as a reader. Good job to the author and I wish you luck!!!

It's a very interesting read for sure. I would totally recommend this to anyone. The author has done a great job at writing the story and though the prose could use some editing, the overall plot and characters are amazing.

Working on it rn, school can be very hectic haha. But thank you so much for the support, I really appreciate it.

This is the first time in a long time that I've felt compelled to read more than one chapter of a book that I've read on this platform. All tops to the author, this is a real gem.

It's definitely an interesting story, though I wish we knew a bit more about the characters. The prose is nice though a little bit confusing and some imagery could have also been added to draw the reader in more.

Great job! Love the character design and plot, the dialogue could use a bit of tweaking but otherwise, the story is great! Keep up the great work!

The characters and plot are very intriguing, though the grammar could use a little tweaking, that is my only problem. Overall, the story is very interesting and I give tops to the author for the creativity of this piece.

Omg, this book is just great. I love the prose and everything and the characters do a great job of drawing me in with their personalities and dialogue. Keep up the great work!