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really just live your life. bro
:D :D 😀😀😀 😂😂😂😂
Author good work so far. gray still hasn't given himself regenerative powers, I have a few suggestions either wolverine from X-Men or Ban from seven deadly sins. with regen. he could rest easy in the current world. Anyways thanks for the chapter. 5 ⭐🌟 ✨⭐⭐
dude this chapter is a mess up the MC has his knowledge of our earth and his memory from being mark grayson from another timeline and still thinks revealing himself is a good idea. and takes idea from a 14 year old , like come on. it seems to me he didn't learn anything from his previous lives and he's really just experiencing life for the first time as a 14 year old.
bro if u are doing the demiurge can u look for the other version that doesn't have distance limits. just to inform u
bro weldone with this Info
author I just noticed that you haven't even introduced kurama at all, we all know the reason Naruto has chakra control problem is because of kurama and the seal and you haven't even touch on that and suddenly Naruto has perfect control of his chakra. or did I miss it somewhere .
the level of joy, as I was reading the stockpiled chapters only to be met with a massive cliff-hanger is jarring.