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sorry about that I meant either go TPP or FPP .

I'll be blunt POV shift is bad. Its's just redundant data. I already read what was going on why would I need a second POV of the same scenario. If it's defferent scenario I can get with it. Think about it like this you are a bystander who is watching an elephant trampling along the street, if in case you could see through the elephant's eyes, the bystander's recantation or the POV through the elephant's victim's eyes will be just redundant or useless data. So either go TPP or TPP not both the preliminary chapters where the story is building up it won't be a problem but further down the road it'll be hard to keep up.

I'll be dropping this here. sorry

this is where I am dropping this

Sorry to say this, but the story is a bit wierd, same with the main character, not in any world will he survive with his mouth.

Why are tailed beasts included, they are not just chakra each of them has their own personalities, if they are just new life form created from store that's understandable. Also, I think unless used as a spirit pet they won't do much for a cultivator, even then I think only four tails and nine tails looks good as a spirit pet.

why did you stop? Are you planning to update any time soon or did you drop this one?

Even with all the stupid choices MC made I thought going forward it would change but got worse, henceforth I am dropping this thing.

ok.

Too many POV's. You already have a narrator just narrator 's POV or MC POV is enough, may be its just me but think about Movies and animes aren't they just TPP.