BlackRaven_

reach to 140 chapter fast I wanna know what happened's looking forward to ur work

nah dude u did a batter job then I ever could

me just scrolling to find something to read, 1. in popularity?? wtf?? this is so 🤣 funny, ur 1st in popularity and the other novel with more chapters isn't even in the list. made my day.. keep writing mate, if you get up to 130 chapters I'll switch to this fantastic to read

so I could only real 2 chapters before i had to quit, the translation is subpar so far, it is readable tho it's filled with Chinese elements, the background mob is how do put it in simpler terms retarded i guess, they behave like they are mind controlled by someone chinese dude and he is trying to make them act normal but he is doing a bad job at it. idk how to say it, just read it and you'll understand. ps: the personality of the characters are changed so don't get ur expectations high. pss: the starting is brain rot at its finest.

dude I am just saying but this is already being translated really well, it's called "Marvel's master of heavenly magic" with up to 139 chapter, the chapters have been a bit slow, however they are translated really good, anyhow what I am trying to say is that you should work on something else, because people are going to compare the two works, just friendly advice, anyhow you can do as you please. PS: Can you tell me where you find the raw versions of these novels and if you translate them to read or just read them raw?

I see, thanks

please do

thanks for keeping up ur extra chapter promise, I can gladly take few hours just going through them, dude I respect that you can write long ass chapters, i tried doing the same but never achieved it. P.S for those who are wondering how long the chapter be 2k or 3k words right. ⚠️NO ITS ALMOST 40k words⚠️ average chapter is 1.5k words.

an honest review of this novel: 1. MC has only come in I think 10 chapters, others then that the mc has not shown his presence. 2. Mc has lived as long as humanity itself but however he hasn't even used his powers(literally he is immortal and could become overpowered but never used his powers other then making some energon in the few starting chapters other then that he never and i mean it when i say never explode his powers. 3. other then the few chapters form mc pov. author hs only been telling others pov, i know but come one for 20 chapters it's been different povs. 4. dude has been posting the backstory of both optimus prime and Megatron, and it's alright sometimes to past the back story but dude for the last 15-20 chapter been posting the Transformers One movie (the animated on which tells the backstory of the prime and Megatron) 5. Mc is more of a human who has no powers(he has powers but he doesn't know what they are and what he can do because he never explored them) he is more like that one character that dies before the plot that's the kind of man the mc is (form the small amount of interaction we have had so far) I'll stell be reading this just to know where he is taking the story although i have no interest in the novel otherwise. ps if anyone know some good fanfiction do comment them please I am bored as f, I came back to this novel to write reviews because I had no other novel to read otherwise I do not give a f about writing a review.

same question, do tell us more about your pov