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i have not read the novel fully but can you tell how is it harold's child did she cheat on him or is it from her relationship with harold
Does Qin Yu ever meet his dad and mom in the novel and does anyone has the novel raws and I like the novel but it is too long for me and too stretch
What happens at the end do Kim Hyejin and the Ahn Yejun get together please answer me quick?
Thanks For the update
Thanks for the updates after a month long wait
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Author, please stop the FMC from comparing the MC to other men or I think the vies of the novel will decrease. And please make the MC the best kisser there is
I Think author your story is good and has potential but there is no character development. The Female Lead is still hung-up on the past with Icarus and other lovers and always comparing the emperor with them. I mean in the previous live she was too naive and got misled by others that's her fault not Alwin or others. And what loneliness and despair when she is too self-centered on her own feelings rather taking a look at other's feelings. I hate FMC to be honest I mean who believes a maid when she says emperor killed his own son and she didn't ask him to confirm just too selfish too care for other feelings. In This life also she only thinks for herself and yes, she feels guilty, but she doesn't do anything to change herself except just trying to be manipulative vixen and gaining allies and even with Ferdinand she always calculating how to act and people who want to be with someone don't try to act they let emotions convey their feelings for them. And why is she always comparing Ferdinand's kissing to Icarus and other and why are author never improving his kisses and I mean if in the future she kisses Icarus and enjoys it then I will quit this novel I think everyone would with how much self centered you have depicted the FMC. I think you are female author, but I don't think you should give this leeway to female leads and I mean it a means to improve your writing style. Yeah, there can be conflict between the couple but it's always the FMC doing wrong and getting angry instead of the male lead who should and in the end, it has to be the male lead who has coax the female lead. Okay this is my review and I don't mean it to be offensive but please consider it in future writibgs
Thanks for the chapter