CaliforniaRoll7688

awesome stuff, keep up the good work!

I like the characters and where the story is headed. My only two cents is that the chapters are quite lengthy and unless something interesting was happening I struggled to keep reading.

Exciting to see all the new spirity writers present their amazing books, this one is no exception! [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp] [img=fp]