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PS: They killed a good idea! Now it's just a story about a simpleton! I read it only for the sake of the simulation, because it's 100 times more interesting than 90% of the main plot! I read it to the end and cursed myself for it, because there are only 4 simulations in the whole story! 1 simulation - Poor Orphan, 2 simulations - Dark Merlin, 3 Simulation - Dwarf Blacksmith, 4 Simulation - Alchemist Dark Lord! In the end: the main story is very long and boring, short Simulations with monotonous retelling are better than the main story, all the characters are cardboard and cause 0% Emotions!

BORING! The time gap between simulations is very large! There were only 2 simulations! The story itself without simulations is an ordinary good fairy tale with friendship and family ties! I don't understand why only 2 simulations are needed? Why not make more simulations is a mystery! Simulations only give talent, and are limited to max. 10 places! Simulations are not needed in the work and the story will not lose anything! Apparently, they added simulations only for the sake of interest, because without them the story is simply uninteresting!

what the hell is going on? Snape and the settler are selfish and suddenly they have a desire to help others! In general, all the love with Lily is just overstated and unpleasant! And I still don’t understand why no one thought of simply modifying the love potion! In short, everyone is selfish and sad about Lily, but they don’t have the courage to simply take her as a slave!

what is this? why was snape's father acquitted? the whole fanfic was ruined!

good idea with the system! But the story is terrible! MC - Beta, Hermione's servant and Harry's assistant! The story itself became just a retelling of events!

error in the super level list! and that will do!

can we not mention MC's cheating again? except for revenge of course! I just don’t really like this moment!

can you make the events of his release? can you be brief please?

please send me the name

Ultron dealt with the plot! as in season 2, the girl who absorbed the power of space easily overcame a whole set of stones! Strange also fought against a whole set of stones without any effort! although it was hard for him with Ultron! In short, the plot is more powerful than all!!!!!!