PilgrimofWisdom

Hm.....

To be different from the original story you could have him make a deal with Mo Eversnow from the beginning, perhaps asking for her personal teachings and maybe some help in getting his first treasures, like the thunder soul and the flame essence soon. In the beginning, maybe starting to cultivate the Tyrant's Manual instead of the Chaotic Virtues, those little things that slightly improve the story. You could ask Mo Eversnow to help you absorb the souls from the cube in exchange for the spheres of pure energy that the Pocket Hunter provides. He could then ask for her help to steal the sect's treasures by taking the moon that he knows where it is, asking her to use her divine sense to find the entrance and then use the treasures to refine his marrow faster. There are many possibilities, you just have to use what is already in the story and add your ideas. Ps: I started reading Martial World thanks to your fic.

DeviusHerdan

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The chapter was good, but I still don't understand why the MC didn't just suck ancestor Gu Yue into his immortal aperture and stop him from activating his Gu worms? After all, a mortal cannot resist the suction force of a blessed land, much less its suppression. And not to mention that it seems that the inheritance of the clan's ancestor seems to be incomplete, since it was mentioned that he possessed one of the great inheritances of the sea of ​​blood, that is, he had the ascension methods and at least one corresponding immortal recipe.

True, if I have to count, it hasn't even been 50 years since he first returned.

Lying on the ashes of my being, I wonder... Why is my d*ck hard? because today I tell you! All those who accompany me will be honored by my father, and all those who go against me will meet the wrath of my father! May the wisdom of this old shell help you walk your Dao