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But in seriousness, sorry for info dumping. I will try to make the story more showing and not telling.
That’s the whole point of teaching
True, I agree it's a dumb limitation, but honestly it was my first time writing and I just wrote whatever was in my head. I was stuck on wanting it to be fast pace so that the mc will be OP or a slow pace where it will take a while for the mc to reap the rewards. Sorry for not executing it well.
Hey Kamikaze_Eagle, I appreciate you for your honesty, and to be honest I kinda agree with you. There were plans in the future that will allow the MC to gain all of the skills he had been taught when the students reaches 100% loyalty, but I didn't execute them well as I was stuck between wanting it to be fast pace or slow burn, so I apologise for that. I admit that I overused the agriculture part so from now on I will keep them to a minimum. Most of all, thank you for reading the story even if it's not for you.
I understand it now thank you for clarifying man, just I can’t really make this accurate to the power scale of DB just because it would be completely out of reach, also he would need more SP to buy external techniques. Even with Ki, if there’s no external techniques it would be as useless, so I hope this justifies my choice. But overall, thank you for letting me know, I’ll try to fix the power scaling if you don’t like it. 😁
I absolutely get it, I’ll try to tone it down but still staying true to his character. Appreciate your feedback!
True, I did miss on explaining it well, but basically he cannot use them even if he taught it himself, that’s the limitation.
Well could Yamcha destroy a planet? not really. He still has ki but he isn’t planetary level.
He just loves teaching and seeing growth. There isn’t much motivation but the system is his motivation. The more he teaches the stronger he’s gonna get to protect himself in this world.
You're right, I was so focused on the story, I just didn’t think about it. Thanks for pointing that out man, I’ll fix it asap. Big ups ZackDKaizo for helping me improve the quality.