I have a very overactive imagination as I can think about several ideas and some details at once. The ideas I often think about are what ifs in Anime
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I didn't, they're on hiatus.
Here's what he'll probably wear on Sakaar.
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I was honestly confused. At first I thought it was a plan until the fact that Eri died in this AU chapter from your main story.
Seems he knows that something is amiss as he mostly likely saw her 'golden eyes'
Couldn't find one that had similar features to the live action version of sabretooth but here's what I found for Victoria Creed:
And plus you need to provide some details in what goes on in the daily life of the MC themselves otherwise you'll confuse your readers if you rush to often like you did in your first two chapters. And it'll be a slow progress but it'll be better than before since you'll be to sway your audience much more than before depending on how much detail you instill into your rewritten chapters.