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I can’t lie bro got some serious English writing grammar is on top. I have read where some Arthur’s translated and their English it feels like it’s advanced grammar and English that does not work with these kind of stories. This guys or girls translation is perfect you get immersed in it Bro keep it up hope you translate other novels

I don’t get one thing why is mito so emotional ess ??

Great someone else has this perspective and thinks outside of the box

Dammn it’s good and unique actually i recommend it one hundred times

It’s kinda hard to read you don’t know when is talking or when it’s the systems thought

H and I nah that’s gotta be the lowest rank I have ever seen in my life. And I have read more then 5000 novels too

Fuck tou mean understandable until 23 mother fuck I didn’t even understand the first two paragraphs

Good idea lers goo

Ahhahahahaha this comment was mad funny and your wording nah I need you me Dictionary

Ok good world building and very detailed. Good structure. Let’s wait a couple of more chapters. Good luck on your journey Arthur