yoonica
i love kpop and kdrama. bts. bollywood. anime. comic. webtoon. manga. manhwa. manhua. i can abit speak korean. im trying to learn korean, japanese, chinese, hindi. im poet and author. im good in art.
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yoonica3 years ago發表the story is good but cover attract me more. updating 2 chapters in a week is good, try more step by step. hope you success in contest.😄😄😄
- yoonica3 years ago回復 yoonica
hmm....living as a pig. but it depends on main thing that is in your novel. cover maybe a man with a piggy maks or a piggy nose. readers almost like anime picks.
- yoonica3 years ago發表
Everything is great. I like your novel senario. I heard something like this before so i think this type of stories never become old and always are interesting. Only the cover and name of novel arent suitable.
- yoonica3 years ago發表
it was better if you describe soldiers face cause i imagine all of them with one face in my mind😅 but i guess cause they arent too important, you didnt it.
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it was better if you describe soldiers face cause i imagine all of them with one face in my mind😅 but i guess cause they arent too important, you didnt it.
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