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The title made me curious but the writing felt odd from the first chapter, still I continued. It feels like a machine written story, no emotions, no character development, so many loopholes and gaps, no flow or rhythm to the story. Hope to see corrections or improvements.

Is it just me or is the story being rushed? Also, how can the finance minister's son issue the death penalty? How can the biological father keep calm and easily accept the situation? How can Merai be so submissive even when he is a general or was he general in name only? I have just started reading it so I will be optimistic and continue to read. Hopefully, it will all make sense in upcoming chapters. Hi Author, please continue and keep fighting [img=recommend].

I like how the story is developing and with a good balance between horror and mystery. it's an entertaining journey [img=recommend].

Hi Author, is the novel on hold? Haven't seen updates for some time now. I hope everything is fine at your end. Patiently waiting [img=update]

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Thanks for the new chapter. It was comparatively long, I like it, keep them coming 😜. I am still confused about what is really going on in the orphanage and hope to see it revealed more in upcoming chapters.

Hi Author, I read through the new abstract you have added and I believe it will help a lot and attract new readers. My personal favourite is the 3rd one out of the 4. Thank you and good work. 👏

Wow~~, this is my first reading of the horror and suspense story in LGBT+ genre. Well, tbh, I was deceived by the title of the novel😮‍💨 but I don't regret reading it so far, the only caution I take is reading it in broad daylight 😉. It has successfully kept me curious about what's going to happen next and I hope the updates will be regular and faster. Well done author, keep up the good work 🤗.

Hi Author, I liked both your novels, this as well as the fake prince. Please continue to be inspired and release wonderful chapters. [img=recommend]

It was mind blowing, had a little more gore than I would like but surprises kept coming and that hooked me enough to even spend coins after a very long time. [img=update][img=coins]