no comment. lol:-)
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author i would like remained you sleeping powder don't work like that in movie or novel you need to wait few minutes from it to start working
everything is good and story is great but system introduction seems bit lackluster and bit too semple maybe you can improve on that [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
fact that MC found his purpose right after his rebirth it feel weird maybe you should give it some time. like how he understand his situation by looking around or through his(body's) memories and found it is a pity that India cannot handle it's initial situation after the independence. so it can be his reason for determination[img=recommend]
death to Chinese! bring freedom to Novel!! freedom from propaganda! freedom from brainless(stupid) MC! freedom! freedom!freedom!
why leaps when you can surprise them in term of cultivation realms? kids now day's are too immature[img=angry]
please do not use this setting it feel weird
I am impress![img=nervous] finally smart MC[img=recommend]
infinite loop of death and reincarnation
what the f*** isn't she is his enemy?? why he talking to her so nicely??