TruthHurtsX1000

Over half this story constant Info dumps. Can tell whoel thing so far in like 2 chapters. More actual story instead of wiki info dumps

It's like Mc turned stupid just for drama with that. Luke they wouldn't stop him. Just take them in ffs

So filler and excuses

Honestly hated this chapter. Just felt like filler and jumped to bs to drag out story. Had nothing to do where we were at. Dome with this. This ruined flow and everything

So suppose be the real story but all info dumps. Wtf is this

So much for smut stuff lol 4 chapters and still hasn't even really started. Like dragged out much. Keep padding chapters and word count ig. You won't last long. Peace

What a failure of translation. Still saying elf and all that bullshyt. Google translate at best ig. Didn't try at all

How about they just write a story instead of needing to pad words or word count. More effort to fake work than actually do it lol I just know webnovel been horrible with both in last few months. More than I ever remember

Superman in harrypotter. Wtf the point. Instantly mad this boring af

Wish release was faster. 2 days and not much happened. Just feeling drawn out now