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@Rusted_Jade this is a repeated chapter author-san.

Well, I don't usually comment on little mistakes, but this one is really weird. so, for a video to be fabricated you need source, another video from inside the same store at least. well, leaving that aside wasn't the cameras in shop broken. when did such a video got recorded?. BTW, I am not angry just amused.

you put effort into making this novel and it turned into a good novel but sadly there is several points that is making it unfruitful.for example you made an adventure into the dwarf kingdom made the mc into the its king with the 2 Elf princess as his wives and a rich mine but later you disposed of it all by two words "kingdom fall" without anything out of this Volume but Victor and a potential enemy that rarely appeared.this is just one of the many event that you made only to dispose of later, I have the felling that you are merely throwing out all kind of events without prober planning or that you forget about it.

AUTHOR! are you going to continue writing or is this just a temporarily releases? I already forgot most of the characters and events, I don't want to reread it only for you to stop again.

a whole chapter for a monologue!!?please don't do it again author.

someone with a holy magic, please cast purification on me🙏

I am not mad about the edit itself but that he tried to lie about it being the case all long but it is you guys who didn't realize.just to make it clear, I like the story that I read it several times, that is way it is annoying.

I fell like cursing for real but I will refrain,Mr author, are you making fun of our IQ or your, I wouldn't have really minded if you said that you edited it or left it with no comment but, really, don't you know that chapter 3 will get a notice beside it that it got edited 2 days ago? coincidentally the same day this chapter was published.moreover the old version of the chapter is everywhere on the net and easy to confirm.the worst part is that you didn't completely edit that chapter since there was more than once that "the protagonist" got mentioned even "the hero's" at the end of the chapter.that is really a let down.

rather than enjoying the story I got a headache.sigh, couldn't you make it less complicated.

cruel author!😭 I just hope the MC won't become a jerk or a chicken after this.