Daoistgod

I'm sorry that my novel is not to your liking, it's my first time writing a novel so I know there are a lot of plot holes. but I will improve myself, thank you for your comment.

I appreciate your feedback and I will try to improve myself.

I'm going to be shameful just this once and rate myself.this my first novel . I won't say my English is completely good but I will try to improve myself. Thank you