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The plot of this novel has really big potential but gets ruined by the writing. There is 1 chapter that got skipped. So many typos, he, she etc. Past, present, and future tense needs to be fixed. Overall its 6/10 if you could get past some chapters which literally give you stroke while reading. But has a potential to be 11/10 with better writing. ps. still going to read