IamBoredGuy

-Be me, a popular singer-messaged by a talented kid about colab-Accepts thinking we would do awesome collabs-Talented kid wants me to smuggle him outside gang territory for collab-Wat do I do???

Do you mean mainly lewds instead of plot? Then no. I think your current strength is the tasteful and comedic prose, not lewds, though I think that one Cyberpunk chapter where you Co-Authored with your wife was quite good.

Deathflag moment, also can you please not do the whole Skyrim thing again. I understand the need to expand word count but the whole thing just screams filler to me. At least write important stuff even in fillers.

What would happen if he plants sharingan in his eyeholes? Hahaha.

Bodyguard? Come on man, if he starts taking companions to missions I'll be so disappointed. I thought it was supposed to be used as a trainer or something, cause there's no way that superhero kid wouldn't have created someone strong from his past missions.

Why? How did he break his mental limit? By holding back doing something stupid? Come on man, I would've accepted it if he was under torture or something. The story is interesting but the MC and the obvious plot armor is making me reconsider.

Based grandma.

This is so random lol.

Author wants to stay true to the Source Material. Even that earlier chesire situation was full of bs.

Good fanfiction for now. Even I can tell a forced plot when I see one. If it's repeated too much just to cater to YJ's plot then what's the point of writing ff if the author isn't going to change anything? As for writing, not everyone has free time to write garbage like you.