KiaoSuvan

The author did a very good job with the story, despite its main focus being a romance, the action scene depicted is wonderfully written and paint a clear image in my mind. The pacing is fast, and the story is direct and to the point. I can assure anyone who stumbles upon this story to give it a try. Keep up the good work! :D

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Once chapters in and I can see how great this story is already, Keep up the good work!

With only the first paragraph, I manage to see the situation depicted clearly, Great Scene . :D

Thank You very much ! :D

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The Author knows their way with the words, and it's clearly shown as soon as I read the first paragraph. Though I usually don't usually prefer a full romantic/drama story, It is clear to see that the author did a very good job conveying the emotion of each scene. I could feel the situation of the main character and it hit quite close to home in the early chapter, which is a good thing as it means the author convey the emotion well enough for the reader to empathize. Keep up the good work, you did a great job!

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review a lot, I hope you enjoy the story, I will be posting more chapters every day.

This is the author of this story (Teehee) giving himself a shameless five star. I want to express my gratitude toward everyone who took interest in this story I write. I originally write this one on a whim, but I found great enjoyment in reading and editing this story, and I want to share it with everyone :D . I will be occasionally checking, I'm active most of the time so feel free to leave any comment, I appreciate any support and criticism that would help me improve upon my future work. The performance of this story will directly affect my future work and life, as this would be the first novel I decide to commit to it as it is and not retconned things (I must apologize for those who follow my other work which has been cancelled, I'm still working on the final draft, I can't thank you enough for the support you gave me.). So please, If you have fun with the story are want me to make more, please support me by simply adding it to your library, and I will appreciate any review, comment and power stone. For I truly wish to be able to pursue and sustain my writing and art career, every support from you mean a lot to me. Lastly, I hope you enjoy this story I wrote, I will be posting at least one chapter a day for now. Thank you, everyone!

One chapter in and I'm interested to learn more about what this little psycho would do next. Though I see many mistakes and Typo, I try not to hold that against the author too much. The premise of the story is fascinating and make me wish to learn more about how the story will go. Keep up the good work!