Mr_Frost94

Soooo the mom doesn’t notice that Noah has bruises and cuts from getting beat up? Yea this story isn’t very well thought out.

Ok so I started this novel after it was completed. So I just gave a 5 star rating for that. Anyways, the story seems ok? It’s kinda hard to follow with the sentence structures and grammar. Some, or rather most, of the chapters are not well structured. I’m finding it hard to keep up with what is happening and staying interested. I think this story would have been great if it was written a little better. Sorry for the harsh review. I did try sticking with the story. I made it to chapter 40-something. But I have to call it quits. Hopefully, some writing revisal can be done.

Is his dad a pedophile?!

So the mom and sister ain’t gonna say anything about Blue having no glasses and a swollen eye? Umm okay then...

Haha fell down some stairs!

Same

How would Abel know if Zad was telling the truth there?

I’ d say a werewolf.

Thats what i was thinking regarding the intial question. Theres no death energy at the academy abd hes on planet Norma now, so he could actually practice necromancy. Yet he goes back to the academy and practices the lightsword?