Drewseffi

Really good so far, hope the story keeps getting consistent updates. Definitely worth a read at minimum, not much else to say so far other than good job.

I’ve very much so enjoyed this, hoping it continues to be updated till completion. Great quality Great characters Good development Good world building Great romance Great MC psychological viewpoints

I completely understand that! You’re doing a great job on the translation and obvious assistance on changing things grammatically to help the story flow. I’ve thought thousands of times about trying to write a story but the reality of it is that it’s incredibly hard. If you have the spare time and a desire to write, you could always try making a separate version of this book that you can change aspects of or add additional details to as an experiment to gain experience at your own pace. All the while continuing your stellar job on translating and updating chapters for this novel.

Super enjoyable read, if anyone stumbles across this novel and even has an inkling of intrigue, they should 100% give it a shot. Minor grammatical errors that don’t affect the reading quality much at all, but still noticeable sometimes. MC is enjoyable as he is navigating the world trying to achieve his goals, all the while constantly battling himself trying to balance ruthlessness and compassion. I especially appreciate that his progress isn’t linear, there’s plenty he is learning as he goes and information that was previously thought to be correct that is then proved wrong. The world building is fun, nothing too fleshed out detail wise, but also surprisingly consistent in terms of the details provided while the MC is in each location. It’s kind of a funny balance that works simply because (as previously stated) of the consistency so it feels like you’re given a small but intriguing picture to look at. The side characters are great, each one displays their own unique personality and emotions that stay remarkably consistent throughout the story while also not remaining stagnant. The ONLY true problem with this story in my eyes, is simply the update consistency, or rather, lack there of. I understand the authors plight as he has stated recently that life hasn’t been the most fortunate as of late. But, that doesn’t mean I’m going to artificially inflate the rating for updating stability. If the author can regain consistency in uploading then I’ll gladly change my review as I highly respect the time and dedication that has gone into this story and greatly appreciate the privilege of reading it. Overall in my personal opinion; Writing Quality; 5/5 (occasional minor errors shouldn’t weigh too heavily) Updating Stability 2/5 (not a 1 simply because it used to be pretty consistent) Story Development 5/5 (enjoyable amount of mini arcs and world navigation) Character Design 5/5 (Enjoyable MC and side characters, nobody is one dimensional) World Background 5/5 (If I went off of details of the main areas in the story it’d be lower but I’m factoring in the additional characteristics the author has included as well as the inclusion of cultural details and differences)

If it wasn’t included in the synopsis and the authors notes, I would really struggle to ascertain that this is a translation. The grammar and word usage is as good if not better than most original English fanfictions, so massive kudos for that alone. I really enjoy the different elements of the world building and the only gripe I have is that certain settings are a bit rushed leading to a lack of detail in some aspects. MC is surprisingly enjoyable despite my general dislike for scheming “youth” character and while sometimes I scratch my head at certain choices, it’s nothing detrimental to my enjoyment of the story. The thing I’d like to highlight the most is the navigation of emotions. While the original author definitely forced certain aspects of some characters emotions and choices, it’s simply to help tie together points in the plot so nothing too bad. But beyond that, I love the subtleties of emotional change and importance in lots of the conversations. Overall (while trying not to spoil anything); this is a very very good novel that everyone who stumbles across it should definitely give a chance.

So far I’m enjoying this to a great extent. It’s rare to get a fairy tail story that actually attempts to flesh out not just one character, but multiple. Along with the current pace of world development I am pleasantly surprised by the quality of this fic. While the grammar isn’t perfect, it’s still better than 90% of all other fics on this app as of right now. I can only hope that the amazing author can take the time to continue this story and have fun along the way. If you read this Mr/Ms author, please take criticism with a grain of salt, while it can be beneficial to read and take criticism into account, far too often do authors on this app read too much criticism and feel upset. This story is your brain child and should bring you happiness, so please continue to understand the reality that you can’t please everyone and understand that to make a long and meaningful story, you need to balance criticism and your own happiness. I can only hope and pray that this fic continues and that you are happy and healthy 🙏🏻. Thank you for blessing us with this story. (Sorry for the word vomit, I just get heartbroken every time an author starts a wonderful piece of fiction and drops it)

I completely agree, it’s got a lot of potential and author has clearly thought a good amount of aspects through. But there just needs to be more time dedicated to fleshing out more details in order to make aspects of the story come together coherently.

1. Preferably not, but if so, please only one additional love interest 💔

Perfect in my opinion so far, not enough for a comprehensive review but that come hopefully come in due time. This story shall get all my power stones for the foreseeable future in hopes that this story continues and doesn’t get dropped.

Beautiful. Easily one of my favorites ever.