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Thanks for the chapter
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Thanks for the chapter
This story's title is inaccurate.
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This is my first fanfic and I really like this! It's a fanfic, so I was expecting wish fulfillment, and that's exactly what I got! There are some things that could be improved, though. There are a number of times when the grammer is incorrect. For example, the characters will be described with the wrong pronoun. I also think Eiji should dedicate more time to the girls that are already in his harem aside from just gaining more. I wanna see him go on dates with his girls like Sona and Rias, turn on the charm by playing some instruments or something. I also want him to just get to the point where he can marry the girls and get them pregnant so they can start having kids. It's been long enough. Just do a time skip or something. Maybe after he wraps up the DxD and Trinity Seven franchises(which should be soon). I also want to see more of him helping his women get stronger by giving them the rewards he's gotten. Things like Koneko learning the 8 Inner Gates Technique, Irina learning Water Breathing, Xenovia getting the Boosted Gear, Momo getting the Hana Hana No Mi, adding Haqua to Shadow Garden, and things like that are a lot of fun to see! Also, maybe vary up the types of sex they have. Maybe do some cosplay or something? Soapland stuff? IDK. All I'll say is that I really enjoy this, but it could be even better!