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This is my first fanfic and I really like this! It's a fanfic, so I was expecting wish fulfillment, and that's exactly what I got! There are some things that could be improved, though. There are a number of times when the grammer is incorrect. For example, the characters will be described with the wrong pronoun. I also think Eiji should dedicate more time to the girls that are already in his harem aside from just gaining more. I wanna see him go on dates with his girls like Sona and Rias, turn on the charm by playing some instruments or something. I also want him to just get to the point where he can marry the girls and get them pregnant so they can start having kids. It's been long enough. Just do a time skip or something. Maybe after he wraps up the DxD and Trinity Seven franchises(which should be soon). I also want to see more of him helping his women get stronger by giving them the rewards he's gotten. Things like Koneko learning the 8 Inner Gates Technique, Irina learning Water Breathing, Xenovia getting the Boosted Gear, Momo getting the Hana Hana No Mi, adding Haqua to Shadow Garden, and things like that are a lot of fun to see! Also, maybe vary up the types of sex they have. Maybe do some cosplay or something? Soapland stuff? IDK. All I'll say is that I really enjoy this, but it could be even better!
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Maybe add the "Hajimete No Gal/My First Girlfriend Is A Gal" and "My Dress Up Darling" franchises? It'd be nice to have some gyarus in the harem. Plus, the franchises could be 100 percented really quickly just by adding the girls to the harem.
Kyouko comes close. And also Mars.
Biochemical Catalyst would probably be a fitting ability for Alice Nakiri since she's basically a food scientist.
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Source: Dragons Rioting A really great manga that I wish would continue and also get an anime! We don't get enough martial arts anime and it's also a harem! The main character is also pretty funny and unique. I recommend checking it out!
I honestly like it when he helps his women get stronger rather than when he himself gets stronger. I wanna see more stuff like Koneko learning the 8 Inner Gates Technique, Irina learning Water Breathing, Xenovia getting the Boosted Gear, Momo getting the Hana Hana No Mi, and stuff like that. That's a lot more interesting and fun.
He already has Cosmic Garou's Martial Arts. And Cosmic Garou is the only one who was able to make Saitama fight somewhat seriously.
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